WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing
If I were there I would walk there and have a picnic there with my family. Who is the man that took a picture? Maybe it was a man from another country that must be on the wobbly bridge
It looks like an enchanted place where no one has been but I think people go there. I would like it there because there is water there and if it’s just a hole with water there. I wouldn't go in the hole with water in it. I would if it was a pond. I would go in it if it was a pond I would have fun in there. It would be amazing if there was a bear there .I would call it Grizzly. I want to go there if I were there I would go in the water if it was salt water I wouldn't go in because I used to get sand In my ear. Once I had to put water in it and I had to pick it out and it worked. I’m never going there again. There might be something over there across that bridge, it might be another person or a view All I see over there was a tree, a big tree, Why is it very foggy. It look’s like something. My family and behind it but it’s foggy over there. I don’t know why you can’t see behind the tree. My family will go there if I were there again we would talk and play and swim but it looks like a yucky place where it might be smelly or something. It might smell good or bad I don’t know what it smells like it might smell like a normal beach. What will happen if we go there? I wonder if there is birds chirping there because I never hear birds chirping. It’s when I wake up I would climb that tree in the picture I would have fun on there. My mum would set the picnic up and I would have a drink because I get thirsty sometimes. We will have fun there if we were there I would have been cool. I like bridges because it's fun to me I would of have a blast . I wish I was there so I can climb the tree that s in the picture. I like climbing trees. . use to climb a tree that was really fun we would have a swim if that water wasn't dirty I wouldn't go deep. My sister and I think they have a shark in that water or is that in another country maybe or not. My sister would play in there and that man or woman might be from another country like Australia or America or something it might be a man. He might have taken that picture so everyone can ask questions about It. If we were in there we would have a super fun time and if we were done we will go home. I would have gone and done my chores and played on my phone.
