the climbing mountin

       

• Amazing things pic story - choose a picture from the file sent to you in your writing folder.Make a new writing document and title it.
• Your story should have a hook in sentence, a beginning middle and end, descriptive words, long and short sentences and capital letters and full stops.
• Your story could have paragraphs, speech and speech marks, alliteration, onomatopoeia and similes.
• Edit and check your story on your own , with a buddy and have it checked by a teacher before you blog.

   This is a amazing. If I was that I will climb because it look’s yummy. for me maybe if they made it to the top. I would be amazed when I'm there. I'm gonna eat some of it  because I like watermelon. It is my favourite brain food. I wish I was little so I can climb on the watermelon. I like watermelon. I would climb all over it  because it is big and you can eat it. It is super delicious. I like watermelon at my old house .I had one and it was good when I ate one before and I felt cold as well when I ate it also are these real People on this picture or is it just figures?

hawke's bay fire story

Hawke’s Bay

Huge fire sparks State of emergency

Flames horrify residents

As I stood at the end of my driveway I could see the violent,brutal flames of the savage fire destroy my precious home. I run outside and all my precious things got burnt

and I called the firemen.  They use a big hoe and used it to put out all the fire.  The firemen are fast as they drive. They are good as they are saving people.

The people were happy as they were getting saved.

Once I used to go to a beach. It was fun as in the beach . I had fun with my family.

Wow look at that fire burn.                        

Oh no!! Everything burnt down.  All my  precious things  have burned down.  

Boom noooo my house!! Everything  explodes everything burnt to the ground.